Before I die I want to kiss your cheek, hold your gentle hands and tell you I love you once again.
Now scamper off and read some other fine 15 word stories ... just click the Jenny button below, and follow the links at the end of the post.
Saturday, July 23, 2011
Saturday Centus ~ The Kiss
Oh my gosh, Miss Jenny is being really tough on us this week. We get a total of 15 words plus the prompt which is "before I die I want to" ... yeah .... so here is my little offering ... i came in right at the 15 words ... whew!!!
Before I die I want to kiss your cheek, hold your gentle hands and tell you I love you once again.
Now scamper off and read some other fine 15 word stories ... just click the Jenny button below, and follow the links at the end of the post.
Before I die I want to kiss your cheek, hold your gentle hands and tell you I love you once again.
Now scamper off and read some other fine 15 word stories ... just click the Jenny button below, and follow the links at the end of the post.
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21 comments:
this really touched me. Thank you so much
This is sweet and very touching, Jo.
This touched my heart!
Suhweet!~Ames
That's so beautiful. I really love it.
Very, very sweet, Jo. I'm curious to know who you/the writer's addressing.
xoRobyn
Anyone that has lost someone can really relate to this. Wonderfully written.
Would love to hug my parents one more time, or even to just look in their eyes. Nice.
Short but oh so sweet! Lovely words GF!
hugs Lynn
Loved it! Brought several scenarios to mind.
Just beautiful!
Simple yet profound! Yes, I do believe that upon our death beds that is exactly what we would want...
so sweet...
~victoria~
This brought tears to my eyes - beautiful.
You said so much with 15 words. Beautiful! laurie
Beautiful...
puerile ennui
Oh, how many times I have wished for just one touch, one kiss. Here's a link to a poem I know your will identify with:
http://cjschlottman-mypoems.blogspot.com/2010/10/just-once-more.html
Namaste..........cj
Lovely and excellently written...the longing for closeness and love is truly beautiful !
Liked this very much. Very different take on prompt.
Melanie
Soft and touching...a sweet wish
You gave me goosebumps with this.
What a beautiful, gentle wish.
Isn't that one so many of us wish we could make real?
Lovely writing.
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