Saturday, July 23, 2011

Saturday Centus ~ The Kiss

Oh my gosh, Miss Jenny is being really tough on us this week.  We get a total of 15 words plus the prompt which is "before I die I want to" ... yeah .... so here is my little offering ... i came in right at the 15 words ... whew!!!

Before I die I want to kiss your cheek, hold your gentle hands and tell you I love you once again.

Now scamper off and read some other fine 15 word stories ... just click the Jenny button below, and follow the links at the end of the post.

Jenny Matlock

21 comments:

Dazee Dreamer said...

this really touched me. Thank you so much

Cheryl said...

This is sweet and very touching, Jo.

Mama Zen said...

This touched my heart!

Ames said...

Suhweet!~Ames

Madeline said...

That's so beautiful. I really love it.

Rawknrobyn.blogspot.com said...

Very, very sweet, Jo. I'm curious to know who you/the writer's addressing.
xoRobyn

Viki said...

Anyone that has lost someone can really relate to this. Wonderfully written.

Christine said...

Would love to hug my parents one more time, or even to just look in their eyes. Nice.

Lynn Stevens said...

Short but oh so sweet! Lovely words GF!
hugs Lynn

Wanderer said...

Loved it! Brought several scenarios to mind.

Deborah said...

Just beautiful!

5thsister said...

Simple yet profound! Yes, I do believe that upon our death beds that is exactly what we would want...

BEAR's Mom said...

so sweet...
~victoria~

jabblog said...

This brought tears to my eyes - beautiful.

laurie @ bargain hunting said...

You said so much with 15 words. Beautiful! laurie

gautami tripathy said...

Beautiful...

puerile ennui

cj Schlottman said...

Oh, how many times I have wished for just one touch, one kiss. Here's a link to a poem I know your will identify with:

http://cjschlottman-mypoems.blogspot.com/2010/10/just-once-more.html

Namaste..........cj

Nonna Beach said...

Lovely and excellently written...the longing for closeness and love is truly beautiful !

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Liked this very much. Very different take on prompt.

Melanie

Rek said...

Soft and touching...a sweet wish

Jenny said...

You gave me goosebumps with this.

What a beautiful, gentle wish.

Isn't that one so many of us wish we could make real?

Lovely writing.