okay, Saturday Centus ... why darn that Miss Jenny ... this weeks prompt ... I'm not a chicken ... and it all has to be in rhyme ... shidizzle!!!!
this is seriously bad ... so don't say you weren't warned ... oh and it was hastily scribbled between cleaning the bathroom and starting the laundry ... now your just dying to read this aren't you???
Philomena James was a funny bird
I’m not a chicken, she yelled to the herd
I fancy flight, beyond the barn door
And through those blue skies I shall soar
Through those clouds you will see me burst
In the morning skies I will be the first
You can’t tie me down with rope or chain
I’ts in the skies where I will remain
You will hear me laugh … not a cluck
Because I am neither chicken or duck
I am just me, free spirit and all,
Screeching above you I will not fall
Damn, did I just lay that egg???
Well that changes everything ….
Okay you all have my permission to groan and comment big time on my lack of ... err... rhyme???
Peace love & paper
~jo
19 comments:
I think it is great!!
I think it was marvelous. Good Job.
Gotta love Philomena-Happy Weekend:@)
Hahahaha! Sweetie, you nailed it!!! Now you need to create a collage about your poem!!!
I just love this! SO clever! Well done you!
Very good job ! Clever and I loved the punch line at the end !!!
heehee
Delusions of grandeur.
;)
I didn't groan... this is really clever and cute! Congrats on your 200th post and 101 followers!
No groans here, I loved this! Especially the last line, it cracked me up (forgive the pun) Congrats on your 200th post! Kat
Very clever and creative...feel sorry for Mina to be grounded and all.... :)
Very nice! You are quite the multi-tasker!
bizzy
I like it...nice ending too.
Gems xxx
Jo, this was a very clever way to use this week's prompt words! You had me giggling all the way :)
I am grinning ear to ear - I think is fantastic!
Talk about a surprise ending! Good one!
No groaning here just smiles from ear to ear!
congrats on 200 posts dearie.
hugs Lynn
Your ending is absolutely hilarious. Great job!
Great fun! Rhymes can be so elusive sometimes ;-)
No groaning...this was perfect. Loved the last line!
Thanks for the smile!
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