Do not adjust your screens, that is the picture, just that wall of black... here is my take on it all ...
When I close my eyes
The world does not fade to black
It comes forward in micro splashes of light and colour
Dismantling the dark.
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Have a wonderful halloween weekend!!!
18 comments:
beautiful...conquer the darkness!
Jo, this speaks volumes about your creative personality! Brava!!
Whoa! That is so true! You captured it so well in your tiny little word painting. Loved it!
This was a great Centus.
When we were first married and I couldn't sleep, my husband would always say, "Just close your eyes and stare into the darkness." But, like you, when I close my eyes I don't SEE darkness.
Which makes me feel better about the fears that inspired the Centus I wrote today. Thanks!
=)
I do so love your takes on Jenny's prompts. You never cease to amaze me.
You just did SO MUCH with SO LITTLE. It's brilliant.
xoRobyn
I love it! Great writing!
Blessings
Dear Jo,
Lovely poem. I found this prompt very dificult. You make it seem easy!
Thanks for visiting my post.
Best wishes,
Anna
For the benefit of other readers:
Anna's SC wk 78 'A Study in Black'
Lovely..
She (Jenny) was rather strict this week! LOL
A lovely, positive take on the prompt. Enjoyed the light.
me too! Well done! laurie @
http://dealingwithmyinnercritic.blogspot.com/
Great job!
At first I though the photo didn't load then I read on, Wow powerful Jo. I don't know how you come up with this stuff, oh yeah your a writer!
hugs Lynn
Dear Jo,
Hello again!
I've added my pictures. Please come back if/when you have the time.
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC wk 78 'A Study in Black'
Loved this!
snaky tales
Oh my gosh--this is brilliant!! And how totally clever of Jenny too!!! WOW!
I hope you got my email about the button...I wasn't sure if you did...lol
XO
Cindy
What??? no new centus today :0(
Wow Jo! This is amazing.
I totally love this.
Your word crafting here was superb!
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